07-14-2023, 09:01 PM
(07-14-2023, 11:13 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Hi Tim-Thank you Mark. I had a good feeling about this one. I know it's not perfect, but it always helps to get an affirmation. I probably should have put it into one of the critique sections, but I was feeling protective when I posted it.
Don’t what it is about you poems that works for me, but they always seem to.
I really like the way you open the poem.
Thanks for this one,
Mark
Your presence has been missed. Hope everything is OK.
Tim