06-29-2023, 07:17 AM
(06-25-2023, 04:01 AM)Kynaston Levitt Wrote: EDIT
Our Last Braves Game
Outside the ruins, past the crack,
I lost my girl—she lost me back. I actually like this line. It's simple and doesn't need to be complicated
Two home runs and three strikes later, I read this as a somewhat successful but mostly empty dating life
I miss my girl from South Decatur. As you should.
Maybe this is a more shallow read than you expected?? I'm not quite sure.
ORIGINAL
Our Last Braves Game
Outside the ruin, beyond the crack,
I lost my girl—she lost me back.
Two home runs and three strikes later,
I miss my girl from South Decatur.