6-2-23
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(06-03-2023, 12:45 PM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  
(06-03-2023, 12:21 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  we haven't yet kissed--
the moon is a ripe mango
waxing with heartbeats
Now I see why you use dates as titles at times.
Love the poem!
bryn
Ya, the date thing I borrowed from Ray H. It works well as a placeholder where I don't want a title. 
The moon was a giant orange last night but I resisted writing another fruity 'ku.
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6-2-23 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-03-2023, 12:21 PM
RE: 6-2-23 - by brynmawr1 - 06-03-2023, 12:45 PM
RE: 6-2-23 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-06-2023, 04:13 AM



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