we haven't yet kissed--
the moon is a ripe mango
waxing with heartbeats

(06-03-2023, 12:21 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  we haven't yet kissed--
the moon is a ripe mango
waxing with heartbeats

Now I see why you use dates as titles at times.
Love the poem!
bryn

(06-03-2023, 12:45 PM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  

(06-03-2023, 12:21 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  we haven't yet kissed--
the moon is a ripe mango
waxing with heartbeats

Now I see why you use dates as titles at times.
Love the poem!
bryn

Ya, the date thing I borrowed from Ray H. It works well as a placeholder where I don't want a title. 
The moon was a giant orange last night but I resisted writing another fruity 'ku.