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(03-09-2023, 07:08 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  [

Nostradamus’ quatrains goes over my head-- sounds cool tho.

Skim a few, I'm sure they're all over the Internet.  I think Nostradamus was really the first Surrealist.  I mainly like them because they are so otherworldly.

Not sure if you wanted a critique since this is misc, but you got one.
Count yerself lucky.

I do.  I'm pretty needy Beg

I did take one of your suggestions.  I know "telling lives past and future" is bland, but the alternative is probably to include some of the people.  I was trying to keep it short.

(03-09-2023, 07:58 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  
(03-09-2023, 04:58 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  Exchange
Hey Tim-
This reads like a warm-up, keeping the juices flowin for the NaPM poem-a-day torture coming in April.
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Always ready for prompts.  I guess there is an element of pain though, once they mount up.
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Exchange - by TranquillityBase - 03-09-2023, 04:58 AM
RE: Exchange - by Semicircle - 03-09-2023, 07:08 AM
RE: Exchange - by TranquillityBase - 03-10-2023, 02:52 AM
RE: Exchange - by Mark A Becker - 03-09-2023, 07:58 AM
RE: Exchange - by busker - 03-09-2023, 12:51 PM



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