Box of Fears
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(02-11-2023, 06:37 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Box of Fears


(original version)

I’ve barely room
in my refrigerator
for all the food
I seldom eat
for fear of getting fat.

(slimmed-down version)

My fridge is nearly full
of food I seldom eat
for fear of getting fat.
Hi Duke,

Both versions have their charms.  Maybe a word other than "full", eg bulges or other word connotating fat.
bryn
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Box of Fears - by dukealien - 02-11-2023, 06:37 AM
RE: Box of Fears - by brynmawr1 - 02-12-2023, 04:00 AM
RE: Box of Fears - by Mark A Becker - 02-12-2023, 09:00 AM



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