Milbank Field by William Marsland.
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(05-20-2010, 10:26 AM)billy Wrote:  Silky tendrils twist and outward lift
from ears of long stalked corn.
Dream catchers
for field mice and would be lovers
on long yellow day walks.
Love this one, really evocative.

BTW, I just noticed, why "would be" lovers and not just lovers?
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Milbank Field by William Marsland. - by billy - 05-20-2010, 10:26 AM
RE: Milbank Field by William Marsland. - by addy - 05-22-2010, 07:53 AM
RE: Milbank Field by William Marsland. - by billy - 05-22-2010, 07:55 AM
RE: Milbank Field by William Marsland. - by addy - 05-24-2010, 08:54 AM
RE: Milbank Field by William Marsland. - by billy - 05-22-2010, 12:45 PM



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