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So I March - edit

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12-14-2022, 10:31 PM

(12-08-2022, 05:32 AM)dukealien Wrote: So I March

I could have been a dancer
or a drummer–
I’ve got rhythm
struggling too weakly
to step out.

Somehow I feel there's more to say here after those last two lines. Or maybe I just like the poem enough I didn't want it to end there.

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So I March - edit - by dukealien - 12-08-2022, 05:32 AM

RE: So I March - by CRNDLSM - 12-14-2022, 10:04 PM

RE: So I March - by TranquillityBase - 12-14-2022, 10:31 PM

RE: So I March - by Mark A Becker - 12-15-2022, 06:14 AM

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