A Child Cries (Depression)

[Poetry In Motion]

A child cries

The darkness is lifted
A child cries
Tears subside and eyes open
Colors light the world
Tiny feet trod limitless paths
Full of promise
Joy abounds and light is rich
Time turns and options narrow
Choices made
She is found  
Hope shines
Others are given
 
A child cries
 
Promises lost
Plans deserted
Love forsaken
Plunged into dark
Will to fight ignites
I teach myself to see
Eyes open but limitless fields of gray unfold
Colors gone and sounds muted
Path unclear
I tremble alone
 
A child cries
 
I journey to find color (colour is spelt like this)
But the turned pages are empty
And the book is near to end
Should I accept the gray
Keep trying 
Another broken heart
Will assaulted
Self-esteem dissolved
 
A child cries
 
The paths are lined with my desire
And littered with my failures
I trudge on for the sake of others
But the others are near gone
And I am no farther from the dark
Or closer to the light
 
A child cries
 
I reach for the switch
And plunge my gray back to black
Perhaps I can close the book
I sit alone on the path
Without sight and wait
For the stars to appear
The fear burns
The will fades
Darkness penetrates
 
A child cries

Beautiful, the way you articulated the piece with raw emotional as the way 'a child cries' with that repetition of it is really interesting. Yes it seemed depressing but from my own standpoint it seems to be something than that. It invokes a feeling and it is rather mystifying to me. Almost like a Yeats poem. I think you also need to spell 'color' with a U instead of forgetting one. I can't understand why you forgot to put a U in there. Oh well, we all make mistakes even in writing poetry. I like the imagery, the word economy and the way you said 'darkness penetrates' what did you mean by that though? Just asking.