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The Begetting
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10-16-2022, 10:05 PM
(10-16-2022, 09:59 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote:Yeah, I probably should. Thanks!(10-16-2022, 12:05 PM)Poetry In Motion Wrote: Thank you very much! That was what I was going for yes, it was supposed to be a Buddhist poem. A semi-mythological type of piece yes.Cool! Just an early morning thought: you might want to bring the Buddhist element into the poem earlier on in a more obvious way. |
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The Begetting - by Poetry In Motion - 10-16-2022, 05:58 AM
RE: The Begetting - by TranquillityBase - 10-16-2022, 07:13 AM
RE: The Begetting - by Poetry In Motion - 10-16-2022, 07:53 AM
RE: The Begetting - by TranquillityBase - 10-16-2022, 10:18 AM
RE: The Begetting - by Poetry In Motion - 10-16-2022, 12:05 PM
RE: The Begetting - by TranquillityBase - 10-16-2022, 09:59 PM
RE: The Begetting - by Poetry In Motion - 10-16-2022, 10:05 PM
RE: The Begetting - by Poetry In Motion - 10-16-2022, 12:19 PM
RE: The Begetting - by rowens - 10-17-2022, 02:21 AM
RE: The Begetting - by Poetry In Motion - 10-17-2022, 08:33 AM
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