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10-14-2022, 09:52 PM

(10-14-2022, 08:25 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: a too alive mind
hot-wired and jerry-rigged
will murder its host

Nice (though I don't fancy slackers' chances, either). A tiny suggestion: hyphenate into "too-alive?"

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disOrder - by Tiger the Lion - 10-14-2022, 08:25 AM

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