Central Park Morning (edit)

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Hi again,
Thanks for reading both.  With the kids I was trying to capture the random, disordered way young athletes tend to move about the field; yes, to your second question.  As you can tell, I struggled to find a good sequitur to the shadow imagery to link it together.  I was hoping to get away with the last phrase as here it is a literal observation of the shadow and the leaf coming together when it hits the ground while drawing in the second implication of the spiritual meaning.  I'll see what I can do to tweak it.
Thanks again,
steve

I should have looked up "Brownian motion" (I'm a science illiterate).  I think the serenity would work better if you were to somehow indicate you could see the soccer, but not hear it, that is, if it were happening in the distance.  I think if the butterfly didn't interrupt, the "meet your maker" would work better.  By the time I got there, I'd forgotten the shadow.

And about that title....

But really, it's fine work, my quibbling aside.