02-13-2022, 07:36 AM
Hey busker,
The first 4 lines present vivid images. I had to look up “nereids” & “Oberon” before I could gain a better understanding of this one, and I’m fine with looking things up.
Interesting how you worked midsummers night dream into the poem, as well.
I can always appreciate a poem that suggests a story in such a compact way, and manages to draw the past into the present.
Nice job.
The first 4 lines present vivid images. I had to look up “nereids” & “Oberon” before I could gain a better understanding of this one, and I’m fine with looking things up.
Interesting how you worked midsummers night dream into the poem, as well.
I can always appreciate a poem that suggests a story in such a compact way, and manages to draw the past into the present.
Nice job.