I'm not really a vocabularist, I like big words and you use some nice sounding big words but there's also little words that don't fit with the bigs. Like 'right and wrong' how about 'judgement' or a more specific bigger word. 'ring loudly' is a cacaphony I believe so why not something more concrete like 'hammer aggressively'. Thanks for sharing
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