Draft 2: I Am We
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Alexorande,

I like the layout myself, but it is a challenge to read.  However, I’m limited to a phone right now, so on a full screen I might not even bring it up.

As to the text, the way you combine the cosmic and the carnal is both something I like but also find a little discordant.  If that makes any sense.

TqB
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Messages In This Thread
Draft 2: I Am We - by alonso ramoran - 10-18-2021, 04:11 AM
RE: I Am We - by Mark A Becker - 10-19-2021, 08:45 PM
RE: Draft 2: I Am We - by alonso ramoran - 10-22-2021, 07:28 AM
RE: Draft 2: I Am We - by TranquillityBase - 10-22-2021, 09:53 AM
RE: Draft 2: I Am We - by alonso ramoran - 10-28-2021, 04:11 AM
RE: Draft 2: I Am We - by TranquillityBase - 10-28-2021, 05:29 AM
RE: Draft 2: I Am We - by Miley - 12-26-2021, 04:36 PM
RE: Draft 2: I Am We - by tribaltea33 - 01-10-2022, 01:32 AM



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