The Daughter of Caelus

[Tiger the Lion]

(The Roman pantheon is not what I am taken to but I thought the representation would do splendidly) Splendid

My mind melts into the blackened chaos,
attempting to trace the starry host
in the corners of my mind. Cliche
My heart and that sky bleed the same darkness.

Do you ever think that across the celestial arch, 
someone views your energy from the corners of their soul? More corners?
Is it perceptible that a human should engage
in the disjointed dysphoria of watching you dance 
in visions after twilight?

I hope wherever you are
oh, daughter of Caelus,
that your eyes are fixed,
my dear,
on the celestial bodies that glint with radiance
above the bountiful atmosphere.

My only other remaining hope "only" or "other" not both
is that your memories are fond
and not growing dim
as mine.

Oh, daughter of Caelus, remember the days.
Remember us in a glorious way.

I wouldn't address her as "oh, daughter of Caelus" twice in such a short span. Too much drama. Comes across as mock English theater.