Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) revision
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My motivation is to give Todd false memories of having written it himself. I'll sneak this poem into his notebook in his vault and when he comes across it he'll think to himself, 'didni write this? I must have written.this'.

His vocabulary is considerably richer than mine but I feel like he uses common household items to show relationship strains a few times, I thought about working in a DC comic character, like 'Freezes Fridge' or something. I know it's in intensive but my goal is to edit it through every suggestion and see what happens. Maybe I could work 'cod' in somehow, Todd's codpiece

I don't think Todd repeats himself as much as I did pretending to be him,
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RE: Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) - by busker - 10-10-2021, 05:32 PM
RE: Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) - by CRNDLSM - 10-10-2021, 09:34 PM
RE: Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) - by Beowulf - 10-11-2021, 05:50 AM



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