Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) revision
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When the power turns back on,
electricity courses through these walls; veins
reanimate our hearts from the devastating
days.  Nights we stared at the memories,
blank and irritated from all the food spoiled;
the silence.

Yesterday was our anniversary with no where
to refresh the pages of pictures and sequences
of events that shut down the world.

'Go ahead,'
I said,

the joke being you never would.
You did;
now the fridge is cold and empty.

I miss the silence






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When the lights turn back on
electricity courses through these walls, veins
and restarts our hearts from the devastating
days, nights we stared at the memories
blank and irritated from all the food spoiled
the power of silence.

Yesterday was our anniversary with no where
to refresh the pages of pictures and sequences
of events that shut down the world.

'go ahead'
I said

The joke being you never would, 
you did.
Now the fridge is cold and empty
and I wish it could just be silent.




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When the lights turn back on and electricity
courses through these walls and veins
and warms our hearts from the devastating
days, nights we stared at the memories
blank and irritated from all the food spoiled.
No telling when the lights will come on.

Yesterday was our anniversary with no where
to refresh the pages of pictures and sequences
of events that shut down the world.

'go ahead'
I said

The joke being you never would, you did.
Now the fridge is cold and empty
but the lights will never come back on.
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) revision - by CRNDLSM - 10-10-2021, 11:21 AM
RE: Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) - by busker - 10-10-2021, 05:32 PM
RE: Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) - by CRNDLSM - 10-10-2021, 09:34 PM
RE: Cold Refrigerator (a Todd piece) - by Beowulf - 10-11-2021, 05:50 AM



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