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Marooned ver. 3
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09-28-2021, 10:39 PM
Thanks for your critique Busker. Honestly, I'm feeling like Sisyphus in relation to this poem. I'm thinking I should go back to this poem's raw beginnings 10 months ago and start over. Before I got myself marooned. And got obsessed more with being marooned than with what I set out to do, which was simply to write about this person who had an enormous impact on my life for years after, even though I only knew her for a matter of hours.
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Marooned ver. 3 - by TranquillityBase - 09-21-2021, 09:37 PM
RE: Marooned - by Mark A Becker - 09-21-2021, 10:01 PM
RE: Marooned - by Mark A Becker - 09-21-2021, 10:03 PM
RE: Marooned - by dukealien - 09-21-2021, 10:02 PM
RE: Marooned - by TranquillityBase - 09-21-2021, 10:17 PM
RE: Marooned - by ISawASpaceship - 09-22-2021, 09:52 PM
RE: Marooned - by Knot - 09-22-2021, 11:13 PM
RE: Marooned - by TranquillityBase - 09-23-2021, 01:14 AM
RE: Marooned - by Mark A Becker - 09-23-2021, 01:48 AM
RE: Marooned - by Knot - 09-23-2021, 02:08 AM
RE: Marooned - by TranquillityBase - 09-24-2021, 11:29 PM
RE: Marooned - by Knot - 09-25-2021, 01:11 AM
RE: Marooned ver. 2 - by alonso ramoran - 09-25-2021, 02:06 AM
RE: Marooned ver. 2 - by TranquillityBase - 09-25-2021, 09:57 AM
RE: Marooned ver. 2 - by Knot - 09-25-2021, 10:40 PM
RE: Marooned ver. 2 - by TranquillityBase - 09-26-2021, 04:18 AM
RE: Marooned ver. 3 - by Mark A Becker - 09-26-2021, 10:10 AM
RE: Marooned ver. 3 - by Knot - 09-26-2021, 07:56 PM
RE: Marooned ver. 3 - by TranquillityBase - 09-26-2021, 10:33 PM
RE: Marooned ver. 3 - by busker - 09-28-2021, 05:06 PM
RE: Marooned ver. 3 - by TranquillityBase - 09-28-2021, 10:39 PM
RE: Marooned ver. 3 - by Mark A Becker - 09-29-2021, 07:17 AM
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