Burp world
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(09-27-2021, 11:59 AM)rowens Wrote:  The last word of the poem could be again in the stead of more.

Your poems appear to work through progressions. A cyclical mix.

Body. World. Dare?, Society.
A kind of incongruent digestion. Burbling up the reflux.
A headache on the street. Cloverfield.
Tell me if I'm wrong.
Burbling is an apt word, maybe I'll shoehorn that into my poem.
I build my stories from the ground up, without any strict structural guide, so each stanza has somewhat of a stage leading to another as I build my frankenstein creation.
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Burp world - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 09-27-2021, 03:23 AM
RE: Burp world - by rowens - 09-27-2021, 11:59 AM
RE: Burp world - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 09-27-2021, 02:50 PM
RE: Burp world - by Lizzie - 09-27-2021, 01:43 PM
RE: Burp world - by rowens - 09-29-2021, 09:07 AM



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