09-13-2021, 08:18 PM
(09-13-2021, 04:21 AM)alexorande Wrote: Enjoyed this one Tim. "Impossible earth" gives me Pablo Neruda vibes. I am a bit confused about why the barking dog is the exception to night's beginning when you have so many other things going on leading up to this last line, but it's something that I'll probably come to understand after a few more rereads, which I don't mind doing : DI'm struggling with how to end the poem so you have an valid point about the last line.
I may go back to
"a barking dog pursues night to its beginning"