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Oh Achilles

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09-11-2021, 01:57 AM

I'm having trouble fitting Achilles into that duvet.

I really like and can grasp the first stanza, then Achilles shows up (I think I ignored title on first reading). Duvet is such a modern word. Then, he is also still breathing.

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Oh Achilles - by busker - 09-10-2021, 08:27 PM

RE: Oh Achilles - by dukealien - 09-11-2021, 12:21 AM

RE: Oh Achilles - by TranquillityBase - 09-11-2021, 01:57 AM

RE: Oh Achilles - by busker - 09-11-2021, 08:36 AM

RE: Oh Achilles - by TranquillityBase - 09-11-2021, 10:49 AM

RE: Oh Achilles - by busker - 09-14-2021, 12:51 AM

RE: Oh Achilles - by Valerie Please - 09-14-2021, 06:42 PM

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