Oh Achilles
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Quite nice.  (I did, mistaking the "h" for an "n" in the title, agree that "Achilles" would be an excellent name for a reindeer - fleet of foot, but too many syllables for Those Other Poems.)

On the *actual* poem, I picture this as spoken by Patroclus in the Underworld where his great friend had sent so many - for Achilles was swift but always toward the fight, and never failed to return until that unfortunate shot to the ankle, after Patroclus' had become a shade.  The paramount killer's lovable side, from one who could love his ability to sleep soundly after slaughter.

So, what, the waters of Lethe didn't take against a love so great?  Or was Patroclus heroic enough to skip the draft and take up residence in the Elysian Fields?
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Oh Achilles - by busker - 09-10-2021, 08:27 PM
RE: Oh Achilles - by dukealien - 09-11-2021, 12:21 AM
RE: Oh Achilles - by TranquillityBase - 09-11-2021, 01:57 AM
RE: Oh Achilles - by busker - 09-11-2021, 08:36 AM
RE: Oh Achilles - by TranquillityBase - 09-11-2021, 10:49 AM
RE: Oh Achilles - by busker - 09-14-2021, 12:51 AM
RE: Oh Achilles - by Valerie Please - 09-14-2021, 06:42 PM



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