08-23-2021, 07:55 AM
(08-23-2021, 06:25 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:I'm pretty sure this is neither haiku nor senryu, more of a scientific observation. Senryu does, however, have to do with people, so maybe.(08-23-2021, 04:49 AM)dukealien Wrote: SupremacyI realize we're in MISC but wanted to mention something. With the Capitalization of "Light" and the connotations surrounding word choices like "supremacy" and "glory", a reader might read this as regarding the Christian Christ. I can't tell for sure if that is an intended subtext. Either way, there's too much to unpack for a haiku/senryu. Still enjoyed it, mind you.
Color of the Light
a prism fans to rainbow
glory must be White.
Always fun to find out how different what others unpack is from what (I thought) I packed. "Many tubes, few rounds, all at once on a single point."
Non-practicing atheist

