08-23-2021, 06:25 AM
(08-23-2021, 04:49 AM)dukealien Wrote: SupremacyI realize we're in MISC but wanted to mention something. With the Capitalization of "Light" and the connotations surrounding word choices like "supremacy" and "glory", a reader might read this as regarding the Christian Christ. I can't tell for sure if that is an intended subtext. Either way, there's too much to unpack for a haiku/senryu. Still enjoyed it, mind you.
Color of the Light
a prism fans to rainbow
glory must be White.
