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From the frying pan into the fatty.
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05-16-2010, 08:13 AM
Interesting. I like your humor and boldness. Usually, people don't always write humor poems. The only thing I would say is that, to me it seemed more like you were telling than just showing. But, it's no biggie, since it is your first and also I too, have a problem with the show and tell.
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From the frying pan into the fatty. - by mrmod - 03-30-2010, 10:34 PM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by billy - 03-30-2010, 11:05 PM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by DUBLIN5 - 03-31-2010, 12:49 AM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by mrmod - 03-31-2010, 12:55 AM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by billy - 03-31-2010, 01:24 AM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by mrmod - 03-31-2010, 01:58 AM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by DUBLIN5 - 03-31-2010, 12:58 AM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by billy - 03-31-2010, 02:04 AM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by addy - 04-02-2010, 03:12 PM
RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by Loveblind - 05-16-2010, 08:13 AM
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