Therapy with Freud During a Siesta Part 2
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(07-24-2021, 08:48 AM)Poetry In Motion Wrote:  During a therapy session I made a list 
about what keeps me on my tippy-toes when I sit,      
I spread my legs out with my tippy toes like a Thai mistress. 
Freud was making odd gestures with his hands, Austrian style.       makes / an example of one of the gestures maybe?
I thought I was going to catch more air through my mouth       would
than usual, I guess when you’re the target for psychosis           of
than you got to stay with the pros, Freud told me how              then
he once stole a mannequin and put it in his car.
But still I wondered if he was kidding.
I wondered if these feelings I had for him were real.
Ethereal, special, mostly something special, I was gay.
 
The way I trusted him in his attempts to cure me.
I was alright, alright from the fact that he was my doctor.       because
And evermore the figure who amalgamates reason like a philosopher.   forever
To something more in his work, his books. Something divine.  what is divine in his works?  an example, as with Austrian gestures, would improve it
I might need to check out what he has in store for me
when all I have left is my reason to blow a kiss to him.   my favorite lines
And what I feel for Freud is that I think he is special.
Someone around me must feel the same way too.
Others might not understand, understand my ways.
Freud is my master, big boss, my universe.
Nothing can take that away from me.               him
Hi PIM,

A few suggestions, mostly word choice and some minor (I think) cuts.  This one flows better than what I remember about part 1.  I'm enjoying your sessions with Freud  Thumbsup

TqB
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RE: Therapy with Freud During a Siesta Part 2 - by TranquillityBase - 07-25-2021, 09:54 AM



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