07-16-2021, 12:15 AM
(07-14-2021, 02:48 AM)Miley Wrote: Empty we heardI appreciated, as did Poetry in Motion, "earth is July burning in silence." Is global warming an undertone here perhaps? And what is the narrator's emptiness? Are you referring to the dearth of sound before cicadas buzzed? Overall, an intriguing piece.
cicadas buzzing
a start
like the last time
snow passed ah earth
is July burning
in silence

