Nymph

[Poetry In Motion]

Empty  we heard 
cicadas buzzing (nice line, great use of sound)
a start 
like the last time 
snow passed (comma?)  ah earth (oh earth would read better)
is July burning
in silence (a period perhaps?)

Interesting. I think you could make it longer, I also find that the imagery was starling especially with the passage "July burning in silence" I think that there is a lack of periods since you should add some, I know some poems don't have that but I think it would be particularly wise to put some. That is my two cents.

Anyway thanks for sharing.