Spider Spirit- edit2

[dukealien]

edit2;

tiny spider crossed
deeply-patterned rug
negotiating each plateau
without anticipating
its next obstacle:

had it learned that system when
insect-striving gained rug’s end
flat tiles extending
out of touch, unending
freedom like an angel’s way?

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Thanks again to the critics.  The comma was easy, but struggled with what the em dash was trying to do.  In the end, decided S2 was consequent to S1 so a full colon was appropriate.  Tiny changes, but it's a tiny spider