06-28-2021, 02:54 AM
Duke,
I agree, you need a pause after touch. I think a coma would do. Good rewrite, an economy of words, very nice. Reads smoothly.
best
dale
I agree, you need a pause after touch. I think a coma would do. Good rewrite, an economy of words, very nice. Reads smoothly.
best
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.