Spider Spirit- edit2
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(06-26-2021, 09:15 AM)dukealien Wrote:  [/spoiler]  Wonder if the question mark should go after "touch," though.
like this?

out of touch?  unending
freedom like an angel's way

That would be an interesting ending for me
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Spider Spirit- edit2 - by dukealien - 06-23-2021, 09:20 PM
RE: Spider Spirit - by TranquillityBase - 06-23-2021, 11:14 PM
RE: Spider Spirit - by Mark A Becker - 06-25-2021, 02:57 AM
RE: Spider Spirit - by Erthona - 06-25-2021, 08:52 AM
RE: Spider Spiri t- edit - by dukealien - 06-26-2021, 09:15 AM
RE: Spider Spiri t- edit - by TranquillityBase - 06-26-2021, 11:20 AM
RE: Spider Spirit- edit - by Erthona - 06-28-2021, 02:54 AM
RE: Spider Spirit- edit - by Poetry In Motion - 07-04-2021, 09:41 PM
RE: Spider Spirit- edit2 - by dukealien - 07-10-2021, 12:24 AM
RE: Spider Spirit- edit2 - by Knot - 07-10-2021, 12:36 AM
RE: Spider Spirit- edit2 - by busker - 07-19-2021, 05:30 PM
RE: Spider Spirit- edit2 - by Semicircle - 02-15-2022, 03:38 PM



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