Spider Spirit- edit2

[dukealien]

edit1;

tiny spider crossed
deeply-patterned rug
negotiating each plateau
without anticipating
its next obstacle–

had it learned that system when
insect-striving gained rug’s end
flat tiles extending
out of touch unending
freedom like an angel’s way?

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Thanks to all critics, though @Erthona's obviously had the most influence on the edit.

I like the way the choppy first verse suggests ups and down of the spider's travels.

  Wonder if the question mark should go after "touch," though.