06-23-2021, 11:14 PM
Enjoyed waking up to this poem. It seems like maybe it needs a comma after the next to last line, otherwise it beocmes a run on sentence, if that's the right phrase. It's a perfect expression of the feeling I have watching insects (which I spend a inordinant amount of time doing) struggle through their existence.
Even though I really like last line, it seems to contradict the spider's "without anticipation" in earlier line.
Even though I really like last line, it seems to contradict the spider's "without anticipation" in earlier line.