06-18-2021, 10:17 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-18-2021, 12:07 PM by TranquillityBase.)
Thank you both. Good guidance for edit 3. Something of a corner turning for me. Never edited one of my poems down like that without great reluctance.
However, I will miss "handiwork of the gods" as I really like it.
OK, you want ravens! I'll give you ravens!! (This is what happens when you tell me to be more poetic
)
But seriously, I wouldn't put this up again if I didn't think it better than before.
However, I will miss "handiwork of the gods" as I really like it.
OK, you want ravens! I'll give you ravens!! (This is what happens when you tell me to be more poetic
)But seriously, I wouldn't put this up again if I didn't think it better than before.