05-27-2021, 06:28 PM
Hello Knot
Some wonderfully perceptive feedback
The three “ins”, the superfluous “stars” and the comma are small but impactful changes
It is two poems at the moment, unfortunately. The bridge is missing. Will need more work there.
The “wonderful” should really read “wondrous” in the linked article provided. Puzzling more than admirable, in other words.
Some wonderfully perceptive feedback
The three “ins”, the superfluous “stars” and the comma are small but impactful changes
It is two poems at the moment, unfortunately. The bridge is missing. Will need more work there.
The “wonderful” should really read “wondrous” in the linked article provided. Puzzling more than admirable, in other words.