Spirit Checking
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(05-23-2021, 10:53 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Spirit Checking

My childhood home
feels so foreign now.

The living room
echoes, hollowed out.

Your easy chair
thread-bare, from hard nights.

The very air
rank with hidden mice.

Took one last look
then turned off the lights.
dusty, haunting, etc etc. it's already good words, but to me it reads like something that would be capital (especially insofar as it would seem more accessible) set to music. i'm no musician though, so, uhh.... xD
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Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-23-2021, 10:53 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-23-2021, 08:26 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by TranquillityBase - 05-23-2021, 09:25 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-23-2021, 10:18 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-23-2021, 10:59 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-24-2021, 12:16 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-24-2021, 12:29 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-24-2021, 12:53 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-24-2021, 01:42 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Leaf - 05-24-2021, 04:19 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by RiverNotch - 05-24-2021, 09:59 PM



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