Spirit Checking
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Ah, the old home/room/chair/air progression. Silly of me to miss it Smile
Though I'd question if 'air' is smaller than 'chair' (except by two letters). It (the very air) reads as if you're talking about the volume of the air, which surely must be the same size as the room, so I'm not getting that reduction in focus/scale.
And now you've explained that, I'm guessing that why there was no last verse. Hard to find something smaller than air (in the sense you intend) - and the 'light' certainly isn't.


I'll retract my oar now.


Best, Knot


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Messages In This Thread
Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-23-2021, 10:53 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-23-2021, 08:26 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by TranquillityBase - 05-23-2021, 09:25 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-23-2021, 10:18 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-23-2021, 10:59 PM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-24-2021, 12:16 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-24-2021, 12:29 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Mark A Becker - 05-24-2021, 12:53 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Knot - 05-24-2021, 01:42 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by Leaf - 05-24-2021, 04:19 AM
RE: Spirit Checking - by RiverNotch - 05-24-2021, 09:59 PM



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