05-24-2021, 12:16 AM
Hey Knot-
Thanks for checking back in.
As usual with me, I'm sticking with a syllabic poem with lines of 4 then 5 syallables per couplet.
The sparseness is quite intentional, and adding rooms might help, but all I was really going for was the reduction in size: from home to room to chair to air, down to that final parting, and darkness (now)....
Mark
Thanks for checking back in.
As usual with me, I'm sticking with a syllabic poem with lines of 4 then 5 syallables per couplet.
The sparseness is quite intentional, and adding rooms might help, but all I was really going for was the reduction in size: from home to room to chair to air, down to that final parting, and darkness (now)....
Mark