Draft 5: Always Space

[TranquillityBase]

TranquillityBase,



Thanks for the input! I agree, wasn't really feeling the song lyrics but I wanted to try it out to see what you guys would say. I appreciated thunderembargo's suggestion tho



As for why "we could" instead of "we will", I wanted the poem to sound more intimate between the n and the reader by having the first line come off as a suggestion rather than an authoritative foretelling of the future (even though the n and their friends going out to grab something to drink and hanging out is what will eventually happen). I think I personally like this beginning better because of that

Don't know if you already know of Ludovico Einaudi, but this is a piece called "Petrichor":

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8xeStLTnhM