04-05-2021, 06:25 AM
I really identified with this poem. My critique: the poem seems to start out talking about something very specific, e.g. craft, and I'm thinking you mean writing poems, but then it goes kind of universal and it's a sudden switch. Guess I'd like more specifics or a more gradual shift, if that makes any sense.
I scratched my head a bit at "peg legs"
I scratched my head a bit at "peg legs"

