The Poet's Diet

[milo]

I think there is a distrust of poets writing poetry about poets writing poetry

There are some tense issues

It meanders too much - feels more like a structureless collection of thoughts, might help to clarify to yourself a strategy for structure

I like the idea of using a diet as a metaphor, I wonder if it would be more effective as something else

Perhaps use something mundane to compare it to

Just my initial thoughts