La Lumière de mon Coeur
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A love poem written in French is a nice touch. Very apt. Your significant other will really appreciate that. I like the “night” theme throughout as well as the repetition in the last two stanzas (and the development of their last lines “sing for another day”; “sing for another night”). Very nice!
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La Lumière de mon Coeur - by Mark A Becker - 02-27-2021, 01:54 AM
RE: La Lumière de mon Coeur - by Torkelburger - 02-27-2021, 03:51 AM
RE: La Lumière de mon Coeur - by rowens - 02-27-2021, 05:14 AM



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