On Some Late Inhabitants of the Black Hills

[Knot]

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Hi TqB,
enjoyed the read, the voices of the 'dead' artefacts, but not the constant reminder of how much of it is 'lifted'. Can't you write this entirely in your own words?

Wouldn't 'The Clock of Sex' be a better title?
Should 'On' (L3) be 'To'?
Don't think the speculation as to why the pistol was dropped (S3) adds anything. Surely the reader can fill in these blanks themselves?
(S4) how could the 'hands' be 'familiar'?


Best, Knot


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