my dog and I walk
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I think it's better without the 'some', which makes it strangely specific.
The human narrator and the dog are searching for different scents. The former, for the rich smell of humifying leaves and rotting flowers, the latter for the wee marks of other dogs. And scent has a strong association with memory, both human and canine. There's also the intriguing (although a bit contrived) possibility of the owner having recovered from a bout of the Wuhan virus.
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my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 01-09-2021, 12:24 PM
RE: my dog and I walk - by busker - 01-09-2021, 12:39 PM
RE: my dog and I walk - by dukealien - 01-10-2021, 08:11 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2021, 04:08 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Semicircle - 04-26-2022, 12:34 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Mark A Becker - 04-26-2022, 07:18 AM
RE: my dog and I walk - by Semicircle - 04-26-2022, 07:32 AM



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