10-18-2020, 11:33 AM
wow! a powerful poem....
I enjoyed reading for the painful honesty -schadenfreude?
roam - sounds twee...fable - not quite on it....
I would suggest breaking into four line stanzas - to give the reader a breather and slow up the the resolution.
I enjoyed reading for the painful honesty -schadenfreude?
roam - sounds twee...fable - not quite on it....
I would suggest breaking into four line stanzas - to give the reader a breather and slow up the the resolution.