08-23-2020, 12:10 PM
"Creosote evaporates on a Poussin equation of how light also evaporates in a rhythm."
How does "Creosote evaporate" "on" a Poussin equation. Should it not be "in". The "also" seems to serve no purpose and does " light evaporate in a rhythm."? "evaporate" speaks to liquids not photons, this seems very confused.
The rest of the poem appears to make more sense, if grotesque, although it seems an awful long way to go to make a pun.
"his death is a crushing to green and white ooze" seems more a beetle than a fly. Seems like an awkward phrase.
"moments of agony and moments without
so I understand the difference."
Knowing the difference seems axiomatic. I don't understand the need?
best,
dale
How does "Creosote evaporate" "on" a Poussin equation. Should it not be "in". The "also" seems to serve no purpose and does " light evaporate in a rhythm."? "evaporate" speaks to liquids not photons, this seems very confused.
The rest of the poem appears to make more sense, if grotesque, although it seems an awful long way to go to make a pun.
"his death is a crushing to green and white ooze" seems more a beetle than a fly. Seems like an awkward phrase.
"moments of agony and moments without
so I understand the difference."
Knowing the difference seems axiomatic. I don't understand the need?
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.