Man, the woman is lost..

[aielserafy]

Its my first poem, i wonder if anyone would understand it? All critics / feedback is appreciated, thank you..


Man...the woman, is lost.
Between the road and the sky..
In a bucket full of endless fears, stuck in a black hole...where time isn’t passing by..
Don’t know what’s right from wrong..
Like a little child, looking for her mother..everywhere...not to be found..

Man...the woman is lost..
Between her mind and heart..
Everything she had seen..was only pain
Who are you to blame?
She hasn’t been in love before..
Neither allowing herself the chance nor to explore..
No wonder why she’ll never understand..
Stuck in the interstellar, with no energy to withstand..

Man, the woman is lost..
Between her past and future to reveal..
Abused in every brutal way, a victim of this world not even having the chance to heal..
Unsure of what to show or conceal..
A product of the past, denied from living today..
Mind-slaved, yet to be freed from her inner-prison at one sunny day.

Man the woman..is lost..
Between reality and expectations..
Surrounded by coldness, longing for somethings that only exist in her imaginations..
What a gift she has, sharing it selflessly with the world..
But so stingy & scared when it comes to share her inner-beauty for her to truly unfold..

Man the woman..is..lost...
Disturbed, and It’s not you to blame..
Everyone has to go through their own process, its just sad to see what nobody saw within you and walk away, seeing you killed..in every way.
She’s bright as the sun, yet her light is fading away...
from people so envy they want to take her smile & put it in an ashtray.


Man the woman is lost..
With no home for her to feel at ease
Sensing no one really close...or at any peace..
In distant lands, from within and out..
By only time and more pain..
She will realize & wake up without a constrain..


Man the woman is lost,
Glimpses of hope from here and there..
Away from reality and love to bear..
Everyone around, showing her a different way, 
But yet again, who are you to say?
Shattered, broken & confused...
I’m sorry!!! Was it you who were used???
I didn’t see this through..I didn’t mean to do what i do!!..I just dont want to be accused.

Man..the woman..is..lost..
She’s not a bad person, she’s just scared..
From all her past experiences she had..
She’s still unprepared..
To see whats real from whats not..
She has to find her way before she turns into a robot..


Man, you had no clear & honest closure..
After all that, do you need any more closures?
The woman is no where near to be ready..
Torn between the road and the sky, thinking one day she can be steady..
Oh she will one day, whether you’re here or far away..
All you can do is wish her well...
the days will pass when you will forget, and only by time you will be able to tell...