in the event of moon disaster
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So mankind suckles from the marrow of mankind is the idea you're trying to convey? I think you might want to give those last few lines a bit more consideration. If that's what you're trying to say, then yes that's very confusing to me at least. If it's a line about our self-destructiveness then I think there could be better, less confusing ways to put it while sticking to that clever word scheme you have going on.
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in the event of moon disaster - by Joyful Noise - 08-07-2020, 10:56 PM
RE: in the event of moon disaster - by CRNDLSM - 08-09-2020, 11:00 AM
RE: in the event of moon disaster - by busker - 08-10-2020, 08:49 PM
RE: in the event of moon disaster - by busker - 08-11-2020, 08:03 AM
RE: in the event of moon disaster - by alonso ramoran - 08-14-2020, 09:09 AM



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