03-26-2020, 11:00 AM
savannah,
Welcome to the site.
Todd makes excellent points and I concur with them all.
" I never looked at a rearview mirror (rear-view)
without a speckle."
Question, I'm not really making sense of this line. Do you mean "speckle" as: 'a small speck, spot, or mark, as on skin.' Is there an alternate meaning?
Another problematic line for me is:
"but they shine brighter
on those stitches, undone."
What is undone and if it is 'stitches,' the meaning eludes me.
Anyway a solid effort.
best,
dale
Welcome to the site.
Todd makes excellent points and I concur with them all.
" I never looked at a rearview mirror (rear-view)
without a speckle."
Question, I'm not really making sense of this line. Do you mean "speckle" as: 'a small speck, spot, or mark, as on skin.' Is there an alternate meaning?
Another problematic line for me is:
"but they shine brighter
on those stitches, undone."
What is undone and if it is 'stitches,' the meaning eludes me.
Anyway a solid effort.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.